By now, you know that there are at least two story lines going on, and they're connected. I'm curious to see if you can guess how the stories might come together.
And what about Felicia and her illness? What do you imagine she has? Is it important?
And Josh? Will he survive?
(And I Feel Fine)
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I wrote what follows just under a year ago, at the start of the pandemic,
and never finished it. When I revisited the draft today, for the first time
since...
3 years ago
Yes, sir - better late than never?
ReplyDelete1)I don't have a specific idea of how the 2 storylines will connect, other than that it's going to take a healthy dose of suspension of disbelief - but that's a nice contrast to all the very real science presented so far. Maybe one of the characters in one storyline is actually the same as one in the other: Josh, Vicente, either one of the Drachmas?
2) Not knowing the syptoms of TB very well, I'm just guessing that's what Felicia has. As far as the others, again not personally knowing the symptoms, but with the clue that they're connected by employment, I'm going with lead poisoning - some kind of poison could also explain the letter to the 3rd pt?
3) I admit to cheating and reading ahead to Chapter 9, but I thing Josh will make it, in one timeline or the other.